For 40 minutes its decent.
I find it a lot better to record a track right after it's written too. Keep the fire fresh, you know? Both ya'll brought some jabs. You got some nice swag and expression on this one. The skit is a bit ridiculous... and ya its mongoloid...
question: Whats the meaning behind 3rd shoe? Do you have 3 feet? 2 pairs of shoes? Are you saying your dick is a leg, and you're referring to a rubber as being a shoe? Insight me !
yes i kno wut u mean now as for the funny part I guess u cant listen 2 klazik nadi either since check his 1st diss at 0:42=p oh and yes a third shoe would b a condom i guess
too bad...
the piano is so loud and the piano is so overpowering. this would've been a dope jam session if it was a bit more balanced. This piano parts are fairly catchy though. Nice work
sorry, the recorder was on the piano, that's why it was over powering. i had no other place to put it without problems.
Ouch...
despite the ear shattering decibels on that chord, this track is decent. Like a worm have a rave in my brain.
Lol yeah sorry 'bout that; I was gonna put a reminder up to adjust your volume accordingly. Glad you approve though :)
Wo xihuan!
This reminds me of the days when I'd sit in Luxian Park in Shanghai and puff a lil higgidty while some old dudes would jam on those 3 string guitar things. I love the chill flute vibe on this. I thought the "clavical drums?" got a bit annoying after a bit though, too repetitive. @:42 is when the beat is "huo"! Nice work man.
ha thanks, unfortunately i'm not very great at drums :)
i've never been to china, and i'd like to travel there someday, i do recognize the terms your using though lol, thanks for the review man
I passed out while this song was playing...
not cause the song was boring, I was under the influence of a golden amber beverage, its a bit ironic after I listen to your verse sober. The verses are decent, steady flow from both of ya. The beat= great, I'm really loving the outro, its perfect with the piano and strings vibing out, it adds that 36 chambers of completion to the song (full circle).
I'm not a fan of the chorus(what a surprise, hey?). Nothing against your voice but it sounds too soft/forced emotion (for singing), and the flow of it sounds a bit rushed.
good track though, both of you should be proud of it.
Glad you liked it man. I am, regardless of what Gas thinks. lol
The battle in the lounge
The dog in Duck hunt, Bahahaha! The smooth Fayde beat makes this sound like such a classy song. I hope you had a 3 piece suit on and sipping cognac as you recorded this. Win.
It's NAhhhhhthing
Why????
...why man? You're above these juvenile reactions. I hope you confirmed with LrYiK, that he was actually attackin you.
you can call me a dick rider, whatever, but.... when you diss cats that I personally know have artist talent and honorable morals I got to shake my head.
So... if you checked your facts before droppin this and you know he was actually going at you then: Nice flow here, defiantly steppin up, props bro. Elevation is tops. I dont like how you "sampled" another artists work for more than half of your track. I doubt you have their permission to sample this...If you listened to that track, you'd understand he was saying that battles are done in quick succession, testing the competitors quick mind and lyrical command. So, to hit Lryik at his level you'd have to freestyle this.
I think you have talent, but sometimes your intentions are misguided. When we battled, we both knew we were writing, so the battle ground was set. It was a fair fight. But when it comes to freestyle (or quick writing jams) vs. written diss tracks, I'm going to choose the freestyle, because that is the nature of the game. I'm not too good at freestylin' myself ( I'm pretty bad at it actually), but it takes practice and passion to get it, so... if you're not freestyling on a daily basis, start trying it. I know you do this to get better, but if you're battling against opponents with advanced weaponry, you gotta upgrade your guns.
I've listened to Flow Battle a few times now, I wasnt able to finds any definite attacks to you, personally. The references were mostly vague, they could be about anybody.
I've told you this many times but, I really wish you'd spend time on tracks that mean something like Happy Days, Feel The Vibe, Touchin The Incline or even Goodbye Bitch Boy. You know when I started listening to your music, I know when you're being you on the mic and when you're just writing lyrics to be what you want to present to people.
Sorry for writing a fucking essay for these 17 bars, but this is 2010. I want you to elevate in the right direction. You got skills, I know yo can write about your life, I've heard you do it.
Again: If you clarified that Lryik was actually personally attacking you, then most of this review is void. If you had a conversation, man to man, before these bars were written then this review is bullshit.
Your skills are stepping up...Use these skills for the benefit of humanity.
Peace bro
first off thanks 4 the 2010 review=D well i made this after i saw this:
"3.22 / 5.00 (+ 0.46)"
submission: Flow Battle with Lyrik
date: January 4, 2010
shots at me?
January 7, 2010
Author's Response:
haha I guess if ya wanna take it like that, but no not directly
so i wrote down a few bars cuz i wasnt sure it was aimed at me, n i thought it was one of nadi's friends not "LyRikLyNkLyNd" lyrik n I battled already I didn't wanna start dumb shit again. No worries 2010 is ma year=D as for freestyles if he really at that lvl then he should b more than happy 2 write it out=P and as for sampling the whole skit which doesnt belong 2 me I jus thought it fit perfectly to wut i was tryin 2 say. n didnt wanna waste time on something that wud get dismissed.
Anyway man thanks a lot for the lenghty review I'm always happy 2 see your help=) happy new years btw=)
Oh and ofcourse I'm gna benefit humanity=D u def dun gta worry bout that
Nice
Creative lyrics=win, Im not a fan of the beat though. I like this track cause I get all the referenece you make. And props on not dropping any L33T speak, I cant stand that talk. Keep up the nerdy words! Peace
lol thanks man
I'm not too into leet myself
and the beat is an NG beat
its tetris so i figured it fitted lol
thanks tho
Finally...
a track I can review everything on:
+Poe: Great lyricism. "Does the rosebush have thorns or the thornbush have roses?" <- hellz ya!
+Namaste: He kills it with those first couple of bars, Im liking those rhymes. He's got more expression too.
+Beat: Basic but serves its purpose perfectly. Just has a great mood for ya'll to groove with. Keep trying that, it works!
The vocals don't sound that bad, you can tell that they are "watered" down a bit.
-What the fuck is with the odd millisecond vocal clips that dont quite fade out or clip. Listen at 1:56 for example.
the clips are breathing from the sample. err.... I mean... they're really watered down crash cymbals in reverse... yeah.... XD
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