Respect
Im diggin the lyrics in this. My favourite parts are the balled up page section, and the commercial super bowl bit. One thing I though was a bit off was the minor monotone delivery, I thought it could use a little more "character". The flow is spot on though. Great work man.
I agree with the reviews under me, this deserves a higher rating, but the NG AP is fucked.
thank you. I'll try to amp up the delivery for you.
I like it.
I like how its repetitive enough to be familar but you changed it just enough to add some alternation to the sound. I would've liked a harder bass hit though. I like the snare that accents that last bass hit though.
Thanks man, glad you dig it
Hmmm...
My biggest issue with this beat, is that the main piano beat is too repetitive, hopefully lyrics will solve this though. I really like the background piano, it really adds a nice calm serenity to the track. When the beat cuts out at the half point is nice too.
Glad you liked it overall, and yes, I see what you mean, I'm sure lyrics will fix that.
I agree with EternalXIII
This a good song to pass out to. This kinda mellow can get the brain conjuring up some vivid dreams. Great work bro.
thanks haha great descriptions both of you
Smooth yet gritty like sandpaper
The singing intro is great, instant attention grabber. Haahah Buick Regal. I gotta give ya a cheers for the Canada lines :D I thought the mixing was pretty good, but I thought that your vocals lost a bit of the crispness, as if you over mixed it (and over mixed the drinks too, you drunkard fool!). Nah, this is illness, props for doing this in one spit, dude's got skills!
Naw i didn't mix the drinks at all =)
Level Up.
Defiantly a step up, nice rhymes, I loved those opening bars, ya flow is dope on this Biggie beat. You start off with a fair amount of energy but near the end ya sound drained. I would say, don't record this one, put your energy into another track. Keep it fresh, ya know?
word lol its not like he'll ever even come close=) thanks 4 the review glad u like it
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Gonna keep this one short:
-Keys are too much in the main section.
+The chorus is sick, I was gonna write this off till I heard that. God damnit its good! I like the crashes too.
Too much as in too loud?
Killin it!
Lyrically murdering with deadly precise wordplay. When you dropped the Spanish I was sold.
lol good looks man..but its not Spanish its Italiano molto regazzo
I likw the energy of this one.
Ok so maybe the sounds you're using are very artificial sounding, but I really the brass melody you got in this. The changes up are genius, especially at about 1:50, it felt like the calm a storm. Good work man
Haha Thanks Mickey
Collab!
First off, I love the original piece. I got agree with Bangjung, the vocals are pretty loud for some of the verses, I had to turn down the volume. Each of you do your own thing, and it flows nicely through each verse. If I had to pick who dropped it best, I'd have to say CW or Ryder.
Epic collab!
Kool man good critique. id say Ryder over CW personally. my verse has less bars than all the others too. so i think i brought the song in pretty nice. thx for the review fam. stay up.
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