Nice!
Smooth beat+carefree vibes+ wicked rhymes=chilled back listening. Great work on the vocals, Im diggin the lyrics and the flow is decent, not a bad outcome from using a shitty mic. Near the end of the verse it sounded like ya flow was falling a bit behind, but aside from that, solid track. I noticed there's some space for rhymes after your verse, maybe a guy could throw down some lines there :D
Thanks. And uh, are you down for that? I was thinking of writing another verse for the open space, but if you can or know someone who wants to, hit it up!
damn...
This is the first song I listened to as I woke up with a numbing headache, this soothed the pain away :) This puts a smile a face, and for that, I gotta give you top notch props! Well done dude! :D
YAY! I'm so glad you like it! Stick around, there's a rap in development for it (I say that a lot but I have a good feeling about this one)
Edit: and now you're on that rap with me, oh how time flies.
Its got me noddin my head...
so its gotta be good! I like the switch ups you do throughout. The mastering is a bit under par, but I kinda like the distorted sound you threw into this. Keep at it.
Thanks man. I try my best =) lol. Im still trying to get the hang of it. Glad you liked it though. Tune in for more.
A new level...
This is probably the most expressive I've heard from you yet. I really enjoy the slight vibratto effect on the carried background strings. The picked quick strings sound a bit "artificial" though (I know you're limited to what sounds are at your disposal though...). For the most part, the beat suits the accompaniement well, although I thought the clap was a bit too oboxious. Def props on putting some low mood into the beat. Keep at it bro.
Thanks dude, I'll take a look at that clap. And ya, I'm trying to find better sounds.
Great lyrics but...
you gotta amp the lyrics a bit in the verses; The horn in this beat drowns out your vocals. Whats with the filter on your voice? It makes your vocals sound muffled. @1:30 is some serious biz. "If I didn't have it, I'd be something that I'm not.
I hope I find a way to take this message to the top," < great line!
Great take on this Haywyre/Fayde beat. Keep at it
Thanks Mickey, I got a shit mic so when I try to add in effects there's like a 90% failure rate. Shit'll be clean when the pro one comes in, in a few weeks :D Thanks for the review.
Nadi dissed communism...
so I'm on your side by association now. So you better win this for the COMMUNity!
lmao, kid really got no clue on what's goin on in the world... I told em 2 read the manifesto... but he too ignorant=( and I won since round 1=D lmfao
YES!
If this was freestyled then I give you major props. You're gotta put it on line with just the mic and your mind, quick deciding and off the dome rhyming! Atta boy, bro.
lmao, I didnt even hear the beat b4 hand (I heard b4 long ago tho) lol, glad u dig it tho=D n thanks 4 the props
For the words at the end...
So ya boy says all this shit about Nadi, but YOU gotta quote him? Why not get HIM talkin shit on the record.
lol i jus wanted 2 get this shit done, but I guess I'll jus redo the skit part tmrw if u want me 2, lol
Coincidence
I've been having dreams like this the last couple of nights, I might have to write some lyrics to this and see what comes out.
Hey man, I'd love to see someone rhyme to this. By all means, carry through :)
~ Almost Technicolor
DUDE!!!
Intense response here. "Smack em!" is raw! Maybe the fade out was a bit too long. The beat is menacing, gotta love those strings!
Funny story: "If rap was a class, You would b absent" (I did a freestyle at ya the other day(just fuckin around, practice, you know) I dropped a line close to this.
This is a killer track man, I can't see Nadi not hittin ya back. Keep at it!
lmao, I dno if hes done crying yet='( ye the beat is beast=D ye the rap class line has been used a few times. Glad u dig it=D thanks 4 the review=)
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