MaoDaMighty's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Delinquent Metroid]

( : ^ o)

uh...wow.

DJ-Delinquent responds:

ikr

[Maverick w/ Mao (War-Spawn)]

Learn how to mix

I dont approve of how you mixed my verse. The overdubs are too obvious and don't match the main vocal tone at all. I'm not proud of this track.

I'm not digging the slow, arrogant flow you have in this. The lyrics are so horribly simple and cliche. If you're a Maverick by lacking lyricism, imagery and realism, then congrats. There's room for improvement.

Tips for mixing: (my preferences)
Overdubs: they should de-ampified so that they are not obvious. You want to use them where you want a word or a line to have emphasis. I'm aware the overdub/adlib vocals I sent you were shitty, if they didn't work, you should've asked me to get at ya with some better vocs.
Adlibs: try panning them to the right or left channel, so that they come at the listener from a certain direction, as its an interjection into the main vocal track.
Effects: The reverb/echo on almost all of your lines is too much. It sounds amateur. Be selective where you place FX. In my opinion, I prefer natural vocals rather than technical add ons.

Tips for writing:
Write about you, not someone you want to be. Write about what you're going through. I'm not gonna give you props till you prove you're not fake.

2010 is the year of elevation.

This is an honest review.

The-toad411 responds:

Whoa.. pure honesty to it's rawest core. Thanks, I've already elevated past this track. It's already an older track, just thought I'd re-up it for the people that liked it. Thanks for the input and time for the review dude, but I feel I've grown past this already, just don't want to go back and re-edit this track.

Peace.
~T.R.E~

[BJ - Video Games Never Die!]

Beep beep bop

You gotta put a warning about adjusting the volume levels at the beginning, I had my headphones on, my ears started bleeding. I'm not much a fan of the high pitched tune from 0:00- :48. At :48 this beat is real nice. I like the alterations throughout, its not that repetitive when you consider all the change ups. The 8bit melody kinda reminds me out the Mortal Kombat theme. nicely done.

GhostlyDoobies responds:

its techno dude, i don't like it either but i guess other people might.

[Head to Head ft. Klaziknadi]

Yup yup ya know it!

I like the feel of this one. The instrumental is hard, and then ya'll lyrics and flow add some ass kickin to it. That chorus is awesome, nice work on the singing. Good work to BAF and Nadi. Keep at it!

BAF responds:

yeah son, gettin' crunk on some son bitches in this one!

[ATM.Jus-Anotha-Day]

360 degrees

"Im already hellbound altho I was heavensent" that line is great. This track is great all around. The beat is sick. "Like a rock!" you should've sampled those old Chevy commercials, it would've added a nice 90's cheese to this.

LyRikLyNkLyNd responds:

Hahaha ture true, I thought about that but never pursued. thanx for the review

[Wyze ft Intaflex - say my name]

Rawf!

Leaving my opinion of the Wyze growl out on this. My biggest problem with this one is that the clarity of what you're saying is difficult to understand at some points. I like the lyrics (from what I caught),clever lines and rhymes. The topics of the verse are kinda of cohesive too. The flow is faster paced, atta boy! Nice work by Intaflex on the beat and hook too. Keep the knowledge flowing!

Blasphem-E responds:

Will do man. As soon as I get this laptop fixed. Thanks for the review

[Converting Vegetarians Mashup]

It's different...

This would be an amazing song to listen to domed out of ya skull.
I liked this song because I've been having cravings for listening to "Stomp" for last couple weeks, that Luda verse is great. This track is definately interesting enough to be downloaded and put on the Ipod. I want to hear this track if it ever gets re-done.

MATATAT responds:

Hah word I agree, hella trippy.

[PJ - Simple Tactics]

Orgasmastic

Holy shit dude this is sick! I had to stop writing this review to record a freestyle. FYI: My freeing skills are wack, but the beat was so ________ (<-whats an adjective better than titz?). Speechless.... wow

PoyzenJam responds:

Thanks man, i spent alot of time on this so that means alot

[[E7] Big L Tribute]

Wow

The fast flow is insane. This is some real good music right here. Fav'd! Nice bars man.

GloineFiodh responds:

Thanks man

[Streets (Produced by W.Spawn)]

Seamless

From beginning to end this track flows through. 36 chambers achieved. Standing ovation commences.

HeLLsGaUrDiAn responds:

lol, thanks a lot for the review and comments. I really do appreciate the responses for this track because of the message I want to get across about hip-hop. Stay up.