MaoDaMighty's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vivisection]

Beat production is dope, no surprise there. Lyrics; on point, loving the introspective narrative, with some f-u attitude. Rhymes is good. I would recommend looking at a couple bars here and there to help build more schemes and patterns into the verse.At points it reads as if there are forced consecutive rhymes in some lines. For example:

My mom’s got a man who doesn't want to understand her skill;
Earth's at a standstill, everyone sits and shits while man shoots and kills;
Some take pills, others poke themselves with quills;
My writings take understanding will and power;
After a clean shower I flower while I glower at your steep inclinations;
Don't want an invitation to your divine inspiration;

- edit-

Mom's got a man, (shit!) doesn't understand her skill
She's at a stand-still. So we sit while the man shoots to kill
Take some pills, or poke yourself with the quill
I write to understand this, it takes power and will
As I shower my flower, I see your steep inclinations
I'm not wow'd by the tower, you can keep the invitation
-

Anyway, thats my 2 cents and a loonie. Solid concept, can't wait to hear when Avatar Caine is ready to drop!

Libby-Shimmz responds:

Thanks for the pointers Mick!

I'll see how your edit flows out loud and contemplate whether to change it or not. Likely will, but it remains to be seen.

[Short Beats 22]

This is so flowable and smooth. That easy jazzy kazoo echo and the keys hit so nicely. Awesome work here.

Williamarch responds:

Thanks a lot! That's the feel I was going for!

[Lazy Bones]

I like this. Very jammy and organic. Also very positive on the vibes :)

TheRealHVAC responds:

Thank you for the review! I appreciate the kind words and I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

[Gunslinger]

this is beautiful. greats layers on it. Perfect for an intro/outro I'd say!

guitarnut responds:

Thank you!

[4 Trillion AU Across the Universe]

Holy Christmas, this is funky! I love that bass so much!!

RealBlargMaster responds:

I am the living embodiment of chaos and discord. But even so, I play no expense when it comes to 🅱Ass.

[Bitter]

m damn this is gritty and pretty, unique sound to it

supafreshpjs responds:

Thanks mick I was worried that I sounded too low

[The Crazies]

Slayin it. Good to hear ya rapping, it's been a long minute since I've hear sick tracks for ya. Keep up

VicTheRapper responds:

Thanks a lot man. How you been?

[Worst Day Since Thursday]

This is good. Verses are on point and hit some relevant AF hits while still maintaining that Teqneekee wordplay. Imagery shines here for ya." I put a cigarette backwards in my mouth and it burnt my lip" "I’m lookin' at my door and noticin’ an eviction notice is lookin' back". Flow was a bit rushed on some those multi syllable words near the beginning of some bars. I thoroughly enjoyed the 4th wall break in the last verse about the chorus/bridge. My issue with the chorus/bridge is:"It’s the worst day since the first day that the curse came//
…It’s the worst day since Earth Day, //" I think these lines are forced and disrupt the pattern; you go through days of the week, then jump to biblical references and hippy talk, Kinda spurious In my opinion. But ya, this is a dope track.

Teqneek responds:

Thanks Mickey. I want to be your friend I hope you know that.

[𝓌𝑒 𝑔𝑜𝓉 𝒶 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝑔𝑜𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝑜𝓃 ~wgatgo~]

wow, I'm really like the spacey vibes and that hard bass, and the transitions work so well. Very well put together piece.Wow, props Zooloo!

Xorberax responds:

Thank you

[Over Egypt Demo]

Love this. It's got a very obscure narrative, but the flow and exquisite rhyme schemes make it all work. Really like the dynamic flow and change ups with the impromptu-ish chorus bars. Has a dope freeverse vibe to it. Mixing/sound quality on your vocs is off, but audibility isn't too bad.

Good listens here!

supafreshpjs responds:

Ayyyy thanks mick you the man