MaoDaMighty's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Weekly Bars #1]

You got a good string of assonance and rhyme going on here. Very ego-centric approach with that hypothetical, "I could do dat, if/or/while I..." direction. Flow was on point. The clarity was a bit off (maybe due to mic) but this could also be due to enunciation/emphasis; a few bars felt rushed, but it's still mostly audible. I thought the lyrics overall were good. The repetition of "fuckin" seemed more like quick filler, rather than decisive vocabulary.

Good work Qshit! <--- MWHAHAHAHAH! Now you gotta make another account!

MDEmergency responds:

The "fuckin" was definitely syllable filler for my flow, and a few were definitely rushed, I wrote the 16 in about 20 minutes but that's not a great excuse, this is why I'm doing these. I appreciate the review man, I'll work on my mixing so we can really see if its my enunciation or the quality, thanks!

[Bars]

Bars! Bars! Bars!

I like the content you're dropping here, its got that bad ass attitude/real talk vibe to it. You got a good voice for rap, but I think you still got some exploring to do so that you got a more comfortable tone. I like the staccato flow you got going on here when you're hitting those quick syllables but a some parts it's a bit sloppy, with more practice and memorization of your lyrics you'll be able to fine tune this.

Thanks for linking me to this, I'm looking forward to hearing you develop as an artist.

Big ups bro

Invazn responds:

Thanks man, I've also noticed that I've just been cramming way too much syllables in there. And thanks for the review, it really means a lot! I've just been maturing as an artist and practicing, I got free time tomorrow so I'm hoping to work on something. Thanks again dude!

[I Got Lyrics]

lyrical swaggage.

"my lyrics huge like my dick (UGHHH), all y'all lyrics fishy like yo bitch (UGHH)"

[e-mail]/swagtag/42069LOL

TinyLobsterFace responds:

yeeeeee son so dope

[The Roses]

great progression in this; u really build on your topic throughout the track. Those voice edits are insane. Very nice work here, solid submission. Im looking forward to hearing more.

Vashelite responds:

Thank you for understanding the level of detail i put Into this.

[Modem Flowin']

Your flow is crazy. The lyrics are quite diverse, you hit on a lot of topics. You got a cool poetic sense to your word. BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAWP!

TinyLobsterFace responds:

thanks mang

[Bite Back (MM/Kelly Diss)]

Lol, I didnt even know this existed. ya... good stuff Nicole.

Carefoot responds:

I still will freestyle you to death for 45 minutes.

[Ru D vs Docter Cerebro]

Ru D: For first battle, not bad. Flow was steady, but could have been more dynamic. His material was quite lacking of creativity and originality.

Dr. C: Doc, flipped and did some research. His delivery was entertaining, but it sounded a bit unpracticed and uncomfortable.

Ru-D gets points for swag and flow. Dr.C gets points for lyrics, delivery, material.
Dr.C takes it.

RRStudios responds:

Ru D: 0
Docter Cerebro: 5

[HDC: Doc vs. Rezzy Tip]

Dr.C bought the hammer. RezzyTip hip hopped on a koopa shell. Dr.C p-winged it. RezzyTip shot an inferno at a hammer bro.

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RezzyTip had a score of 6,200 .pts. Win.

HDC responds:

Rezzy -5 Cerebro-1

[HDC: MC-OG vs. Star69]

Og, dynamic delivery with that chill style. Star69, flowing syllables and bounce.

i gotta give it to Star69 for his consistent energy. og's 2nd verse was kinda weak and bit too laid back. * 69 ftw

HDC responds:

OG 2 Star 3

[HDC: MC-OG vs WarSpawn]

hmm...

War-Spawn had the delivery and flow, OG had lyrics and complexity. I'm gonna go with OG again. A razor under the tongue isn't that smart. OG threw a dodge ball and hit Warspawn in the head. Warspawn cut himself and had to go heal in his health chamber.

HDC responds:

OG -2 Spawn-3