I remember this beat...
Nice story telling Wyze. Not much crit on this to be honest, I'll let Ses troll by and give the word on how this sucks. But one thing I thought was that the lyrics/mood don't sound cohesive with the theme of the beat, maybe thats just my interpretation of the music; I think the bell melody is effective, but maybe the held synth notes counter act the feeling...
Remember your Ps and Qs :)
haha, thanks for the words man. And it's possible, I remember I originally wrote this to a different beat. Maybe I'm just getting a different feel off this beat then you
FLIPZ-a-PLENTY
Favorite N1k lines: "Feel blest in the presence of the prodigal child". "Terminology/Mythology", "...this battle is a tribute" "Dictionary.com/copy and paste" "pause after cadences"
Favourite Blest lines: "Spin this shit in Baltimore" "Hooked on phonics" "Simba, you aint the king of shit" "crusade in Christianity" "living in the country, you're living in poverty" "stepping on your lexicon"
N1k had the quality, attitude and delivery. Blest had the lyrics/vocabulary and I thought his flips were great, I liked how you went with some of the shots N1k threw at him too. Both of you threw some personal shots, which really made this battle prime.
I'm impressed with Blest, I think he really stepped up in comparison to his last battle and Ill give him props for not trying to fake it with a "tough battle rap" voice, he has that calm/relaxed tone; but that being said... N1k sounded more confident and battle ready; his hits, I caught on the first listen, while it took a few listens to catch all of Blest's. If Blest had a lil better quality and more energy in his bars his words would be much better received. I'm gonna give this one to N1k, he's competing on such a high level, he deserves to keep that title another round.
LYRICISM!
Yo Mikado, the lyricism on this track is superb; I'm loving the expanded vocabulary you got going on this track. The theme of the lyrics is real deep too; can really feeling the emotion of the literature in your flow. For critique: I'd say the clarity of some words could use a bit practice; because of the expressive nature of the lyrics you gotta to put a lot of passion behind the bars, but maybe a more comfortable and controlled delivery would get those words better heard.
Overall: great track bro, the beat and the lyrics are cohesive together and the replayibilty of this track is definitely there (been on loop for awhile). Keep em knockin my son :D
In that case, I may re-record this so that 9 can become a 10!
Just for clarification...
I was such a such nice guy that I trimmed this for Wyze cause he's a noob 4 lyfe. I sent Wyze two versions, one with the most amazing outro ever to be heard, ever and the other was just an average drunken hype track that was trimmed @ 1:57.
I never fuck around either! I was being serious: Wyze Stingray went to prison, Wyze Stingray beat your children, Wyze Stingray is the king of the building, Wyze Stingray, he's in there. Wyze in not stupid, Wyze is smooth, Wyze once had an orgy was 30 millions chicks at the same time. Wyze is looking away, Wyze is like a laser beam in the sky. <- Everything is FACT! This is a credible source.
Disregard any smart ass author response Wyze Stingray leaves. Unless he says that Mickey is the only reason this is hype.
Nope, everything is all true. Described me to a tee
Meow!
"The only Simpson you could beat is the role of Wiggum, voiced by Hank Azaria" <- best line in the battle.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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That being said, Wyze Stingray killed it errr... I mean, Klazik Nadi dropped the hammer on that fool, uh... MooGi wins! derr...
Props to PhrOzen, you got the dopest lyrics in the known universe, always a good time collabin with ya bro!
Kung Fu Illaz!
Master Mikado, this collab is TOO INSANE! I can feel the universe implode, ahh!
Madflow drops that lethal nerdcore skill! T.R.E sonic booms the mo fo's out the planet, then spits them demonic rhymes, (Umbrelle ella ella, Hahahh!). PhrOzen harnesses the zen and rips the language of the sacred rap lords! The Beat is dope-o-matic. Great work gentlemen!
Thanks man!!!
Nuh UH!
:) I call you a sweet lil angel from heaven. :)
But aside from that, this is def dope, looking forward to hearing you destroy some poor shmuck/ with my luck Ill probably have to battle you... :'(
Different...
hmm... interesting hype sir. Props on the alternative route though, I can dig it.
"i'm not saying hip-hops dead, but i'm hoping i;ve got the silver bullet for it's head" ^ this line is a bit concerning though... why would you want to kill hip hop?
Ha ha i'm just messing. Thanks for reviewing!
Ya whatever...
I vote for KlazikNadi at least he can flow.
Lyrical Titans!
Glad to see this up, both of ya'll went it and did ya thing. I think Gasmasq won, no, actually I think MooGi won, no...actaully my vote goes for Klazik Nadi.
Mickey, you're an idiot. Quit riding Klazik's dick.
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