Tight
The sample is from my favourtie Beatles song, but I think the beat meshed well with the sample. At :21 the beat somes in nicely. The vocals are clear and nicely delivered. The lyrics are alright, but Im not really feeling the chorus too much. The lines just don't stick (that just my personal opinion, though). Tight track with a relevant lyrics, decent work, peace
Wow!
Funkadelic-toe-tapping tune. I wish I could say something I don't like about this track, but I can't right now. I guess I would of been nice if you explored more of the Mario themes, I heard a bit of variations from the music of 1-1 and 1-2. Excellent work, peace
Feel the sleaze!
I really enjoyed this beat, its simple yet compelling. The bass line is killer, and the "porn" sounds you put in are just classic. Ron Jeremy would groove to this! Nicely done man, peace
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Cool!
The production is pretty slick on this one. I like the fast piano keys. I really digging the vocals on this one, the varied ranged and depth of the lines really carry this song . The "chorus" part sounds deadly. Right on ya man, keep it up, peace
Empathetic
Excellent job man! Sometimes music doesnt need words to convey the emotion/feeling, this track is one of those. The sounds identify very well with a depressing sort of manner, I really like the strings. peace
Real.
Nice man, the lyrics are very deep and passionate. The fuzz is kind of a set back, but its not that noticable. I'm really digging the chorus, this is our planet. peace yo, this is a real hip hop submission.
Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it
Identifiable
I an really identify with this song. You're lyrics are very relevent. I enjoy the section of lines that ends with: "Writer block hits ya like a piece of kyptonite". Thanks for making this song man, I'm really feeling it! peace yo
thanks man..glad ur feelin it...i keep it real....write about the truth and what not...
70 cent
Freestyling is a difficult skill to master. Ive been practicing a lil bit, but Im still a noob. I'm not a fan of the woman disrespect though. I agree with redbomber3030 "You have skills... more skills than the original artist." Heart makes the flow, but practice makes perfect, peace
hahaha its a joke track... hahaha yesss offense haha
Interesting
This is a very deep song. The lyrics are quite descriptive. The flow is expressive and the vocals range is quite expansive (if thats just you, then thats amazing!).The rapping reminds me of "Necro" (its not a negitive) The "heavy metal" chorus part is interesting, I'm not a big guy on metal, but it sounds decent. The musical influences in this song are quite varied: Hip hop, Techno, Metal, 80's Rock, and so on.. I say this song is interesting because I'm not a fan of some of those styles, but its amazing you made song that can't be place into a single genre. I'm glad you put in Modern Hip hop. Whatever you're doing, keep doing it man, peace
Wow!
Thanks for letting me know about your music man! I see you have a great repertoire of music. I'm a hip hop guy so I give you a review on what I know. I'm not a huge fan of "dance" music. I gotta be in a special mood for dance music. As soon as this track busted in I was in that mood! Wow, this is a good beat! The energy as it progresses is captivating. I love that deep bass sound, it hits so nicely. This beat would be complete with some vocals though. I'm gonna put this the good ole Ipod. Great work man, peace
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