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Seemless flow from beginning to end, the lyricism has depth and meaning, the beat is sick.
On the first couple of listens I thought the beat didnt quite match the tone of the lyric/vocals. But after a few it seems to work. I dunno
Great work!
Thanks man and you always sayin that about my tracks lol
Nice
You know, I really like this track, I typically wouldnt like this type of music. I guess what I really like about it is the variating theme and seemless flow of it. I think this would be really good with some lyrics to it.
Hey man thanks for the comment. I'm still trying to find my own style, and I'm trying to develop sound that integrates electronic and some hip-hop/funk vibe (not that this song is a good example of that). Hopefully Ill have some new songs with such a feeling up shortly. Thanks again bro!
LMAO!
at T's review! hahaha!
I respect the fact you are trying to elevate ya skill.
The biggest problem right now is the vocals. The mic you're using is picking up too much background static. It drowns out the beat.
Did you do the beat?
This is a joke, but it's not very funny. The lyrics are terrible, clearly they weren't your focus. The flow was meh.
Keep at it, I guess...
i wrote the lyrics to make fun of all the "rappers" you hear on the radio now adays.. its overly crude and distastful for a reason.. i wrote it in 15 minutes.. and yeah the mic is a rockband mic
G Minor!
This is some sick flows! You're a natural.
The panning is a bit awkward. It sounds like you have two different takes(or the overdubs) playing in the left and right channels. Its not that noticible though.
Great work G Minor!
haha thanks Mickey, I know it sounds a little weird, I was just trying out different methods of making my voice sound clearer, maybe I overdid it. Thanks for the review.
I like it
Intro is awesome- nice build up. The beat is decent, but it sounds like some mastering needs to be done on it. Keep at it!
Reminds me of..
a beat from Pharoah Monch or Pete Rock would drop. The piano keys are sick. MAybe the Hulk sfx could be a bit more on syncronized with the beat. Download!
thanks for the review.
Sorry bro...
Im useless... I got no complaints for this. I may have some words though.
3-hun-6tee
This has sick continuous flow, but I thought the " I " rhyme was overused. the hook is decent.
thanks for the feedback man! i know its not my best work, but i still like it, thanks for dropping by
Crank dat!
Good shit here from Lyrik and Nadi. I thought the hook could use a bit of amping, its too quiet compared to the beat.
It has a bit of distort and a few effects, it's amped alot, if I amped it more it would sound weird, but thanx for payin attention. Nadi and I both thought that at first, but It seems better to have a seemingly lower tone to take away from the fact that it's just another 8 bars ;)
Lyrical Madness...
Im loving those tight rhymes in those bars, you're going all out with the lyricism. After one listen, I'd say you got enough emphasis on the key words, but a few inside words were a bit difficult to get (on the first listen, on shitty laptop speaks). Nicely done man, the microphone is ella vay ten!
hey thanks you like it lol...its the same mic ive been recording with forever..just better mixing
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