your voice has a gritty tone to it, which works well with this beat. There is a poet nature to your flow; if that's your intention, I would suggest leaning harder in that direction by putting more emphasis on the ending syllables of each bar. If you're aiming for a more hip hop/rap delivery, I would suggest working on a more melodic approach. As mentioned in a previous review, the reverb on the vocals makes the audibility difficult to understand. Overall, good work here. Keep working at it!