Decent Attempt
Nice storytelling and lyrics here. Funny material. As for the rap itself; the flow basic and the delivery is a bit too laid back for my liking. Watch your syllable counts on bars a few lines felt rushed and over stressed. Overall pretty good try man, you got a nice progressive building lyric set up, keep em droppin!
-Mao
2pt Mix is sick!
Im really diggin the back a forth flows on this. When's the 3park mix comin out! :P DL/5/Fav. Nice work Mr.Virus amd Mr. Lo, keep this dropping!
Thanks Mickey!
I was steering towards favouring soundcloud for future uploads, but there are definately rewarding reviews like his that will keep me around on newgrounds.
Appreciate the feedback.
Hopefully we'll be able to drop more stuff next weekend, we have a gig week from now though so we'll be back on it soon. Not sure bout a 3 part mix though. The Idea for this track was originally that both Mr. Lo and I are of mixed ethnicity , 2 parts, like a 2-part mixer. It does inspire a possibility though.
sOliD!
Groovy tunes almighty on this smooth drop. The singing on the hook is slick;really like the vibe on em. The verses flow well, lyrics were decent; nice reppin the b boy stance! The outro sequence was smooth, like the "background nonsense" fade out.
Keep it shining!
-Johann Ebastian
Domou arigatou Ebastian-senpai! Always look forward to your reviews, cuz they normally loaded with some good constructicon criticism. I'm tryin my best, but I'm lazy. Haha! There are a few WIP collabs with my name on em that haven't been uploaded yet though, so look forward to those. :-)
Piece yo,
~T.R.E~
Stolen or not...
still sounds sick. Nice touch on the drums, I like the faint cymbal twicks. The breaks are executed well, the drop @ 3:11 is dope. The melody on the verses got a bit dull after a bit, but the reverb/echo on it sounds good.Another nice one Shaggy!
Bars!
Great response Invasive. "Mister Dismember" drops some fury with the lethal bars from down under! Decent spit here, a few lines sounded a bit overstressed (rythmically speaking), but asiides from that, good drop.
Cheers dude :)
of the Night!
Best use of the voc sample of greatest VO from a video game ever! Beat is sick Southpaw! Keep em droppin. DL.5.FAV.
castlevania all day
My brain is...
twitching. :D
hahaha I hope it's a good twitch! thanks for the comment bro..
:o Not Grandma!
Skinny Swag killed somebody here...1:50 seconds of lethal flow and hook after hook. Some of the most offensive lyrics I've heard in a awhile (Butcher styles!).
Keep em droppin
on dat fire shit.
F the system!
Great message here my bro! Can tell you had some experience dealling with these artificial bacon bits. You got really good energy on this, but at times some of the phrases were a bit rushed/slurred. For the most part though really good drop on this. I should quote some of these lyrics on my Facebook (if I wanted to have a visit from the Retarded-inCompetent- Menstrating-Pigs. )
Haha, god damn cops monitoring the internets.
Glad you liked it man.
The definition of..
sick. I like how you named this bad ass track aftter yourself, gettin an ego are we? Nah, I kid I kid. Great work Shagz!
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