MaoDaMighty's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bars]

Bars! Bars! Bars!

I like the content you're dropping here, its got that bad ass attitude/real talk vibe to it. You got a good voice for rap, but I think you still got some exploring to do so that you got a more comfortable tone. I like the staccato flow you got going on here when you're hitting those quick syllables but a some parts it's a bit sloppy, with more practice and memorization of your lyrics you'll be able to fine tune this.

Thanks for linking me to this, I'm looking forward to hearing you develop as an artist.

Big ups bro

Invazn responds:

Thanks man, I've also noticed that I've just been cramming way too much syllables in there. And thanks for the review, it really means a lot! I've just been maturing as an artist and practicing, I got free time tomorrow so I'm hoping to work on something. Thanks again dude!

[I Got Lyrics]

lyrical swaggage.

"my lyrics huge like my dick (UGHHH), all y'all lyrics fishy like yo bitch (UGHH)"

[e-mail]/swagtag/42069LOL

TinyLobsterFace responds:

yeeeeee son so dope

[Mr Jones (Big Red, Instr)]

This is dope. I think what you did with the "my main man jones came from a broken home" line; maybe u could've expanded on it in the outro (digital fx, different cuts...etc). The instrumental is simple, but I think it works well. The harpsichordy-piano is a nice touch. I think a humming vocal layer might add some dimension on the intrumental. Overall, nice remix.

[(5) J Step vs (4) Eye Cue]

Both had some good shit here. EyeCue's delivery and mic presence wins it but the obnoxious shit talking was weak, let the bars do the speaking.

[The Roses]

great progression in this; u really build on your topic throughout the track. Those voice edits are insane. Very nice work here, solid submission. Im looking forward to hearing more.

Vashelite responds:

Thank you for understanding the level of detail i put Into this.

[Modem Flowin']

Your flow is crazy. The lyrics are quite diverse, you hit on a lot of topics. You got a cool poetic sense to your word. BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAWP!

TinyLobsterFace responds:

thanks mang

[R.M.P. - I'm Old Skool]

Good overall composition. Samples were cool. The intro build up was well done. interesting pans.
The audio quality on this sounds bad. The scratches are placed mechanically and don't sound organic/natural--> forced. The overall abundance of sfx was gimmicky and kitch. The sound on the claps is flat, I think it doesn't fit with the rest of the instrumental.

Decent song; probably deserves a 4.12 rating though.

[(7) Butsaay vs (2) JS]

"you couldn't understand me but came back at what I said"

Butsaay for the win.

[(7) Fat Beats vs (2) RJA]

Fatbeats took this. I should express how disappointed I was by RJA's verses but its a waste of time.

[(3) D-GAF vs (6) JLG]

"Flyer then a pelican"

enough said.

JLG won it