"wouldn't bust a grape in fruit fight"
that's one of my favourite lines from Jay-Z. The vocals on this track are little unrefined. T.E.K's part isnt terrible, its got "swagger" and attitude to it but it lacks explosiveness it seems. Your part flow nicely but the lyrics are too straight-forward and lack that creative edge (I've heard those lyrics already from different MCs). I'm not a fan of violent/gun based hip hop, so my opinion is a little biased, but thats what I think. If you can back up the message your presenting, then I have no problem with this track. But thats something only you would know. This is still music though, keep doing your thing man! peace