mmmmm this dope
mmmmm this dope
i love this
mmmmmm this is smooth
tis dope, great layering with the melodies
your voice has a gritty tone to it, which works well with this beat. There is a poet nature to your flow; if that's your intention, I would suggest leaning harder in that direction by putting more emphasis on the ending syllables of each bar. If you're aiming for a more hip hop/rap delivery, I would suggest working on a more melodic approach. As mentioned in a previous review, the reverb on the vocals makes the audibility difficult to understand. Overall, good work here. Keep working at it!
Trying to encapsulate the premise of my physical speaking to my spirit.. much to learn to achieve that proper.. I Appreciate you dropping in, ive only just begun.
twas dope AF
slaps
The beat hits hard AF! Meme-worthy lyrics but I really enjoy the mixing here; great cuts and effects on em. " I mean, Imma hold a grip on the DIIICK" this line had a lolling. Solid track and a hard dick, error I mean deck... ya... thats what I meant.
Ahahah, can't go wrong with a hard deck. I had writer's block so bad, chopping the acapella was my only escape. Now if only I can get 1000 streams on spotify, get 3 cents of royalties, and shave my head like I promised xD
Speaking of, streaming you on spotify rn. Sweet nostalgia
-5 points for AOC sample. +10 for the actual beat.
Kek
this cheese is hard! OOOF!
Its what I do for fun.
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