This slaps!! In all ways and shapes! Primo work here! Love the free speaking vibes ! Truly honoured to have a Mao and Klazik track (with beat production from Libby Shimmz) featured in the outro too! Thank you! 😊
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This slaps!! In all ways and shapes! Primo work here! Love the free speaking vibes ! Truly honoured to have a Mao and Klazik track (with beat production from Libby Shimmz) featured in the outro too! Thank you! 😊
cowabunga!
Radical!
Dr.Fauci said this is how AIDS/HIV started, and not created and selectively given to gay white men in NYC gay clubs in the mid-90.
mmmmmm this is smooth
tis dope, great layering with the melodies
your voice has a gritty tone to it, which works well with this beat. There is a poet nature to your flow; if that's your intention, I would suggest leaning harder in that direction by putting more emphasis on the ending syllables of each bar. If you're aiming for a more hip hop/rap delivery, I would suggest working on a more melodic approach. As mentioned in a previous review, the reverb on the vocals makes the audibility difficult to understand. Overall, good work here. Keep working at it!
Trying to encapsulate the premise of my physical speaking to my spirit.. much to learn to achieve that proper.. I Appreciate you dropping in, ive only just begun.
Beautiful! Let the hype begin!
Cute and cool. I like the cool colour scheme going on here. Could use more details in the face (whiskers, nostrils, and/or buck teeth). Also, check the lining on his hair/left eye. Hard to tell if the feet are boots or big ol' lobby bunny feet. The symbol is interesting; but my sick mind keeps seeing sideways boobs. Considering how many cartoon rabbits I've seen in my days on this ball of dirt orbiting a radioactive star, that being said, I thought this rabbit is original and I'm intrigued to how it develops on.
+ 1 for cropping photo in an effective way.
+ 1 for evidence of understanding general grammar awareness
+ 1 basic symbolism/iconography
-7 for stealing my idea - "The Sproom-Zoom" - It's a spoon, it's a broom, and a vacuum!
You talkin' bout MY invention- The Sproomba
Its what I do for fun.
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